Thursday, July 24, 2008
Spare me a moment
Spare me a moment,
One last look at thee
Spare me a touch,
The taste of your symphony
I've won and I've lost,
Legions and wars
I've killed and I've fought,
To the tune of my wrath
The cry of a mother,
The grief on her face
The tear of a lover,
All insignificant in haste.
Riches and wealth,
I've gathered no end
Murders and stealth,
The wares that i vend
You flew to my heart,
My passionate doe
My evils did part,
You unburdened my woe.
You taught me to love,
To forgive and forget
You helped me to sow,
For all souls, respect
I lay these white roses
At the foot of your bed,
A heart full of losses
With love you once fed
To me your never gone,
An angel asleep
The rhythm of our lovesong
Still stifles my weep.
Spare me a moment,
One last look at thee
Spare me a touch,
The taste of your symphony
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5 comments:
wow brilliant!!have to really sit and analyse this one!!
thank you orion,do let me know the outcome of ur analysis :)
dear ms.Bean,
i will kill you. you say your blog isnt that gr8. this is such a wonderful poem. dunno why, but images from the gladiator movie flashed before me. Maybe some resemblance to Mr.Maximus
Dear dsk,
All my poems(so far) have been reflections of thoughts or emotions ive experienced over the years.I am really glad that the poem created a visual impact however ironically,i have not watched the gladiator movie and have no clue as to who Mr. Maximus is!Thnks a lot for your feedback!!
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