Thursday, July 24, 2008

Spare me a moment


Spare me a moment,

One last look at thee

Spare me a touch,

The taste of your symphony



I've won and I've lost,

Legions and wars

I've killed and I've fought,

To the tune of my wrath



The cry of a mother,

The grief on her face

The tear of a lover,

All insignificant in haste.



Riches and wealth,

I've gathered no end

Murders and stealth,

The wares that i vend



You flew to my heart,

My passionate doe

My evils did part,

You unburdened my woe.



You taught me to love,

To forgive and forget

You helped me to sow,

For all souls, respect



I lay these white roses

At the foot of your bed,

A heart full of losses

With love you once fed


To me your never gone,

An angel asleep

The rhythm of our lovesong

Still stifles my weep.


Spare me a moment,

One last look at thee

Spare me a touch,

The taste of your symphony





5 comments:

Thommen said...

wow brilliant!!have to really sit and analyse this one!!

beans said...

thank you orion,do let me know the outcome of ur analysis :)

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blah said...

dear ms.Bean,

i will kill you. you say your blog isnt that gr8. this is such a wonderful poem. dunno why, but images from the gladiator movie flashed before me. Maybe some resemblance to Mr.Maximus

beans said...

Dear dsk,

All my poems(so far) have been reflections of thoughts or emotions ive experienced over the years.I am really glad that the poem created a visual impact however ironically,i have not watched the gladiator movie and have no clue as to who Mr. Maximus is!Thnks a lot for your feedback!!